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Tick (Part 1 of 3)
For beatperfume

Pairing: Brian/Withheld, Brian/Justin
Summary: Brian has a quota, and a kid has a jacket.
Rating: NC-17


His first thought was hustler. Hot, but in that restless, runty kind of way. Desperate, but trying desperately not to appear so. From the South somewhere from the sound of him, though he seemed to be trying to hide that too. Brian nearly told him to go home, but then the kid smiled as if it were somehow Brian’s loss, and that intrigued him just enough to buy them each a drink.

He signaled the bartender. “Beam, double. And – ” He cocked an eyebrow at his companion.

“Coors Light.” The kid said it with a practiced air. Brian nodded at the bartender and gave his potential trick another up-and-down. Figures he’d drink piss.

“Brian Kinney, I presume.” It wasn’t a question. He looked pleased, but with an added ingredient other tricks didn’t have. Brian couldn’t put his finger on it, but whatever it was made the kid hotter somehow. Confidence? No. Arrogance? Arrogance was closer, anyway.

“If you insist.” His drink arrived, and Brian tossed it back before the kid’s beer even reached his lips. He stood and scraped the stool back, reaching for a cigarette and giving the kid an expectant look.

The kid downed half his beer in one gulp and stood as well, adjusting the back of his waistband like some kind of cowboy. He looked as if he were going to quip, but at the last second changed his mind and switched his expression to a willing one. He raised his eyebrows and gestured to the door for Brian to lead the way.

Brian tossed a twenty in the general direction of his glass, checked the clock over the bar, turned and headed outside. Justin would be home from Deb’s in an hour. Couldn’t hurt to have a quick fuck to warm up.

*

“Boyfriend, huh?”

They were taking the elevator, and the kid was already working the top button on Brian’s jeans. He leaned in for a kiss, and Brian turned his head. “Put your mouth somewhere else.”

The kid grinned. “That’s a yes, then. You guys have a no-kissing rule?” He had pulled Brian’s shirt up and started tracing a tongue trail from his sternum down.

Brian did not answer, but braced one hand on the ceiling and threaded the fingers of his other hand through the guy’s short, light-brown hair and urged him downward. He could feel lips curve into a smile around his belly button. “That’s very interesting,” the kid said with a dip of his tongue. He sounded smug.

“Happy to fascinate.” Fingers pulled his underwear down, tongue following in their wake. Calloused fingertips and chewed nails gently scraped the sensitive skin of his underbelly, hot breath leaving brief damp spots that cooled immediately in the drafty elevator. This kid was making him hard faster than he should.

Then the elevator stopped abruptly and so did his trick. The kid popped to his feet and backed away from Brian toward the loft door, pulling him by the open flaps of his jeans. That same look passed over his face, as though he had some secret pleasure, but he quickly replaced it with a boyish excitement.

“How should we do this? I’m, uh, versatile,” he said in an over-sweet voice, with a tilt of his head.

“I’m not.”
The kid grinned his understanding and looked around through the now-open door. “Rich. Figures.”

“I’m comfy.”

“Uh-huh. Bedroom?”

Brian stuck his tongue into his cheek and poked a finger into the kid’s chest, pushing him towards the sofa, pinning him to the back of it. He brushed both hands outward underneath the kid’s jacket to slip it off, but hands on his wrists stopped him.

“Who’s that?” The kid asked, looking at something over Brian’s shoulder. Brian turned to see a candid photo of himself, Justin and Gus that Lindsay had had framed. Justin insisted on displaying it prominently on the bar for some reason. When Brian turned back, the kid had laid his jacket carefully over the back of the sofa and had begun pulling off his shirt.

“Two of the three guys I kiss on the mouth.” He gave a look of mock apology. “Quota’s full.”

Then they were mostly naked and Brian spun the kid around and bent him forward more roughly than he thought he would. The kid gripped the back of the couch with one hand and braced the other against the seat cushions, gasping as Brian pushed inside, then alternately squeezing and relaxing around his cock in rhythm with Brian’s thrust.

It was quick. The kid sweated a lot and his ass was fucking tight; Brian felt oddly claustrophobic inside him, and from that plus their fevered rhythm, nearly passed out as he came. The kid bucked a few more times and was still, sweat running down his back. Brian pulled out quickly, released what he realized had been an iron grip on the kid’s hips. There would be bruises tomorrow. He didn’t particularly care, but he ran his hand up the kid’s back and through his hair anyway, then crossed into the kitchen to toss the condom.

They pulled their pants on silently, and Brian could feel his trick’s eyes on him whenever he looked away. He felt like a subject, somehow, as though the kid were here to study him. As though he wasn’t all that interested in the fuck.

The loft door rattled. A familiar, muffled voice called through it. “Brian, my arms are full. Let me in.”

“Nice to meet you,” Brian said amiably, passing the kid on his way to the door.

He slid open the door to find Justin carrying three grocery bags full of what he could only assume were Deb’s leftovers and balancing still another under his chin.

“Let me guess, she cooked for all of PFLAG and only you and your mom showed up, so we got saddled with three weeks’ worth of putinesca.”

He grinned. “Close. I convinced Michael to take home at least a week’s – ”

Justin froze and paled at least two shades.

“What?”

“Brian – ”
Then Brian heard a click behind him and Justin dropped all four bags. Marinara splattered everywhere and Brian whipped around.

The kid’s jacket was on the floor. And Brian was staring straight into the barrel of a gun.

“Actually, I don’t believe we did meet,” the kid said in a carefully measured tone. His gun unwavering, he extended his right hand with a snap.

“Cody Bell.”


(to be continued)
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[User Picture]From: beatperfume
2005-04-01 09:26 pm (UTC)
OMG OMG OMG. THANK YOU.

This was fantastic. The description of Cody in the beginning was spot on, and the way he intrigued Brian with his arrogance was perfect.

I cannot wait to read more.

Thank you so much. I love it ^^
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[User Picture]From: mcfeste
2005-04-06 07:01 am (UTC)
asd;lfkasdlj OKAY.
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[User Picture]From: quinn222
2005-04-01 11:59 pm (UTC)
OMG OMG OMG...cliffhanger is so mean!
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[User Picture]From: cempakasari
2005-04-02 11:25 am (UTC)
I agree wholeheatedly. And when I read the description of the picture of Gus, Brian and Justin, I thought of you. ;-)
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[User Picture]From: parallactic
2005-04-02 12:10 am (UTC)
More, please.
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[User Picture]From: darksylvia
2005-04-02 12:17 am (UTC)
This is so awesome. I am on edge. I totally can't wait for the next part. What a great idea!
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[User Picture]From: mcfeste
2005-04-06 07:03 am (UTC)
Thanks! New chapter soon at my LJ. :)
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[User Picture]From: plumsuede
2005-04-02 12:49 am (UTC)
yes. more. more. more.
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[User Picture]From: mcfeste
2005-04-06 07:04 am (UTC)
yessir. soon, at my lj. :))
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[User Picture]From: twistinside82
2005-04-02 05:50 am (UTC)
Wow. Wow. I don't know what I was thinking, but it wasn't this. The hand-snap at the end? Perfect Cody. FINISH PLEASE!!
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[User Picture]From: mcfeste
2005-04-06 07:05 am (UTC)
thank you liz! i'll have a new chapter up soon at my lj. :X
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[User Picture]From: msjudi
2005-04-02 06:37 am (UTC)
Oh. My. God.
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[User Picture]From: mcfeste
2005-04-06 07:06 am (UTC)
hee! thanks for reading. next chapter will be up at my lj soon. :)
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[User Picture]From: quitesparkly
2005-04-02 09:23 am (UTC)
OMG. Please tell me you have the next two chapters in store.
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[User Picture]From: mcfeste
2005-04-06 07:07 am (UTC)
not quite, but they'll be up soon at my lj. :) thanks for reading.
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[User Picture]From: cempakasari
2005-04-02 11:23 am (UTC)
Wow. That's unexpected. At first I thought it was Brian and Justin playing a game.
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[User Picture]From: mcfeste
2005-04-06 07:08 am (UTC)
hee! i'm happy i could surprise you. next chapter will be along soon at my lj. thanks for reading.
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[User Picture]From: aurora_84
2005-04-02 02:28 pm (UTC)
Wow! Why isn't there more? Like right now.

Cannot wait for the next part.
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[User Picture]From: mcfeste
2005-04-06 07:09 am (UTC)
glad you liked! more coming soon. :)
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[User Picture]From: likethemodel
2005-04-02 03:50 pm (UTC)
OMIGOD. ARE YOU GOING TO FINISH THIS SOON? PLEASE HURRY.
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[User Picture]From: mcfeste
2005-04-06 07:10 am (UTC)
there will be more soon, yes. :) thanks!
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[User Picture]From: luciblue
2005-04-02 05:18 pm (UTC)
Ok! This was fantastic, finish soon please? kthx.
:X:X
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[User Picture]From: mcfeste
2005-04-06 07:10 am (UTC)
thank you! next chapter will be along soon. :)
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[User Picture]From: skittles
2005-04-03 12:07 am (UTC)
Okay seriously. NEED. MORE. NOW!
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[User Picture]From: mcfeste
2005-04-06 07:11 am (UTC)
hee! keep your pants on. more at my lj soon. thanks for reading! :)
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[User Picture]From: bjshipper
2005-04-03 04:20 am (UTC)
I had no clue that it was going to be Cody at the end and then when it was it all made sense and I was like- ahhhhh! (In a good way.) I can't wait to see what happens next:)
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[User Picture]From: mcfeste
2005-04-06 07:12 am (UTC)
thanks! i'm so glad you were surprised. :) more up at my lj soon.
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[User Picture]From: xhaleslowly
2005-04-03 08:54 pm (UTC)
Wow, this just totally pulled me in - what a great idea for a fic! Definitely waiting for the next parts :)
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[User Picture]From: mcfeste
2005-04-06 07:14 am (UTC)
asd;fkasd;lkj ETHAN. i'm so flattered that you liked it. more is coming soon to my lj, i promise. :)
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[User Picture]From: strlite913
2005-04-03 09:19 pm (UTC)
OMG, I was so not expecting that! I'm on the edge of my seat here waiting for more.
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[User Picture]From: mcfeste
2005-04-06 07:15 am (UTC)
thank you so much! keep an eye on my lj for more soon. :)
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[User Picture]From: luckycharm_13
2005-04-03 11:49 pm (UTC)
gfkljf

finish now please [-o
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[User Picture]From: mcfeste
2005-04-06 07:16 am (UTC)
hee! i'll update soon, i promise. thanks! :)
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[User Picture]From: redbrickrose
2005-04-04 03:37 am (UTC)
Ahhhh! Must have more!
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[User Picture]From: mcfeste
2005-04-06 07:16 am (UTC)
you shall have it very soon! thanks so much for reading. :)
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[User Picture]From: reeface
2005-04-04 04:41 am (UTC)
alkjflaskj i love you.
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[User Picture]From: mcfeste
2005-04-06 07:17 am (UTC)
omg you too! :D more to come soon.

also, you are an angel for pimping me in your lj. :X:X:X
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[User Picture]From: juteux
2005-04-04 05:59 am (UTC)
OH MY GOD YOU MUST FINISH
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[User Picture]From: mcfeste
2005-04-06 07:18 am (UTC)
OMG I SHALL UPDATE V.V. SOON, I PROMISE.

thank you for reading, cait. :X
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[User Picture]From: ewanmax
2005-04-04 08:50 am (UTC)

tick

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
completely hooked, completely not awake yet, totally unfair, don't stop.
Colleen
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[User Picture]From: mcfeste
2005-04-06 07:19 am (UTC)

Re: tick

hee! thank you. update coming soon! :)
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[User Picture]From: scatterheart
2005-04-04 10:34 am (UTC)
*bites nails* OMG more, please!

(Also, if I had to guess I'd say this is sweetestdrain's, but I'm probably way off.)
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[User Picture]From: mcfeste
2005-04-06 07:20 am (UTC)
um, yeah, sweetestdrain would have done MUCH better, but i'm flattered anyway. :))

more coming soon! thanks for reading.
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[User Picture]From: damietta
2005-04-05 01:03 am (UTC)
Completely did not expect Cody. Can't wait for part 2 and 3!
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[User Picture]From: mcfeste
2005-04-06 07:21 am (UTC)
thank you! i'm glad you were surprised. more coming soon! :)
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[User Picture]From: paddies
2005-04-06 10:14 am (UTC)
OMG you have to finish this...NOW!!! :D

Also: YOU=BRILLIANT.
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[User Picture]From: mcfeste
2005-04-06 02:22 pm (UTC)
:"> thank you, gio! i will have a new chapter up soon. :D
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